You’re going to hate me by the time you get to the end of this installment, and for that I apologise, but hopefully you’ll enjoy it anyway!
If you’ve read the beginning and middle, you can pick up from around page 5. If you’re new, read the whole damn thing!
You are more than welcome to pass judgement. Flatter me with praise, or be brutally critical — I simply ask that you also provide a reason for your love, or hate.
If you’re using an RSS reader, you’ll have to click through to my blog to read it. Alternatively, if you really don’t want to visit my blog, you can read the PDF. I promise I’ll try to finish the story soon, though it won’t be on Monday, I have something a lot better planned… something that involves a competition and my blind cat Eric.
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Maddie
Apr 19, 2009
i quite like your writing. it flows very well and keeps my attention, which is something i struggle……ooohhh….shiny!
sebastian
Apr 19, 2009
Thanks! The same kind of writing style shines through in my blog, right?! Your eye observes and digests every last one of my words, ya ya?
Eric
Apr 19, 2009
You’re finding your rhythm.
sebastian
Apr 19, 2009
It’s coming easier! I sat down and wrote 3 pages in about… an hour or so!
Though I am very conscious about my style changing from page to page, as I am not really ‘a writer’ yet, with a given style… I imagine it makes for a curious read
pinkjellybaby
Apr 19, 2009
I still don’t like Gabriel….
sebastian
Apr 19, 2009
You’re not meant to like him… or at least, perhaps some dirty thoughts, but certainly not THAT likable.
pinkjellybaby
Apr 19, 2009
Oh no, not even dirty thoughts…
Hezabelle
Apr 20, 2009
Remember when you promised me some man on man love? Don’t forget.
sebastian
Apr 20, 2009
I think this might be a bit too early on in my career to try some homoerotica. Perhaps when I’m rich and famous and can write under a pseudonym…
Hannah
Apr 20, 2009
hm interesting…and I like the introduction of Emma into the story. and the way you left it hanging there at the end…I hate you for that. seems like it’s coming along nicely.
Ambles
Apr 21, 2009
Aw, I like the girl! Lots of personality
I don’t like how you say that she isn’t pretty though. All girls are pretty, even if you have to be paying a bit more attention to see it!