The end of a short story… almost!
You’re going to hate me by the time you get to the end of this installment, and for that I apologise, but hopefully you’ll enjoy it anyway!
If you’ve read the beginning and middle, you can pick up from around page 5. If you’re new, read the whole damn thing!
You are more than welcome to pass judgement. Flatter me with praise, or be brutally critical — I simply ask that you also provide a reason for your love, or hate.
If you’re using an RSS reader, you’ll have to click through to my blog to read it. Alternatively, if you really don’t want to visit my blog, you can read the PDF. I promise I’ll try to finish the story soon, though it won’t be on Monday, I have something a lot better planned… something that involves a competition and my blind cat Eric.
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i quite like your writing. it flows very well and keeps my attention, which is something i struggle……ooohhh….shiny!
April 19th, 2009 at 12:29 amThanks! The same kind of writing style shines through in my blog, right?! Your eye observes and digests every last one of my words, ya ya?
April 19th, 2009 at 12:55 amYou’re finding your rhythm.
April 19th, 2009 at 1:51 amIt’s coming easier! I sat down and wrote 3 pages in about… an hour or so!
Though I am very conscious about my style changing from page to page, as I am not really ‘a writer’ yet, with a given style… I imagine it makes for a curious read
April 19th, 2009 at 1:53 amI still don’t like Gabriel….
April 19th, 2009 at 11:08 amYou’re not meant to like him… or at least, perhaps some dirty thoughts, but certainly not THAT likable.
April 19th, 2009 at 11:23 amOh no, not even dirty thoughts…
April 19th, 2009 at 11:33 amRemember when you promised me some man on man love? Don’t forget.
April 20th, 2009 at 2:05 amI think this might be a bit too early on in my career to try some homoerotica. Perhaps when I’m rich and famous and can write under a pseudonym…
April 20th, 2009 at 2:07 amhm interesting…and I like the introduction of Emma into the story. and the way you left it hanging there at the end…I hate you for that. seems like it’s coming along nicely.
April 20th, 2009 at 2:31 amAw, I like the girl! Lots of personality
I don’t like how you say that she isn’t pretty though. All girls are pretty, even if you have to be paying a bit more attention to see it!
April 21st, 2009 at 9:07 am